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[a loved ones tears]

Very cool

But the leads are somewhat uninspired. And your piano sounds really... childish, is the only word I can come up for it.

You should put a key change in the middle of it, shift all the pitches up by one semitone. That would add a little bit of variation to it.

But nice work overall. I like to gripe at the little things, so don't get bent out of shape.

DJeverlast responds:

well im not gonna say im a composin master and the reason the piano sounds childish is coz well, i am a child XD. i dont know many music theory at all and i dont have much drive so i usually just mash it together and i dont have many good noises soooo can you help me out?

[||Vengance||]

...Okay...

Your lead is retarded. I'm not even going to make that sound nicer or nothing. You obviously know how to make music, and you have good synths and everything, but your lead seriously sounds just like a bunch of random-fuck notes.

Everything else sounds good. Just... fucking come up with a lead that's not doing way too much drugs.

Seriously, listening to this, I get the feeling you made everything else, and when it came to writing the lead you just said "fuck it, whatever, random notes on my keyboard. Don't give a shit anymore."

cky12qxz responds:

Lolwut,`

[Intergalactic Meltdown]

^5!

Very nice, sounds like you've been doing this for a little bit :)

This might be the 1st time you've added anything to the audio portal, but it's a great addition.

Oh yeah, constructive criticism.... umm.... Okay, I hate to do this, but I really don't have anything that MrF down there didn't say. I hate it when I'm like "I could use some constructive criticism or something, ANYTHING!" on my songs, and ppl are just like "I'TS GEWD NOTHING IMPROVE YOU NEED AWESOME!".

The only thing is... it doesn't really have an ending. I mean... kinda? I think? It's just a bit random for me.

Zomgah responds:

thanks for the advice. Idk, i kinda like the end but i guess i wont do it in my next song.

[EX - Corrosion [WIP]]

Very cool

You should definately add on to more of this, it's frigging sexy so far, and I like where it sounds like it's going.

If I would change one thing, it would be that just before the key change you need some more buildup. It kinda just sounds abrupt to me, and I wasn't really expecting it. Unless that's what you were going for. In which case, good job! (lol)

Also, you should put like... a lead solo kinda thing. That would be incredible. I'd probably pay for that shit. That'd make my day.

Great job.

Hormigas responds:

Thank you for your input very much!

[Technotronic Generica [Final]]

Good Jorb

Good job for your first actual "Techno" song. Your next couple of songs will definately improve. If you don't want to get tired of a song, do what I do: Sit down for like... 4-6 hours and FUCKING FINISH that shit before you get tired of it.

ForestLomn responds:

LOL!!! Yes and that is what you do. You sit down forever and work on it. The problem for me, is i never have a continuous 4-6 hours unless i dont sleep. Pah, who needs sleep amyways...

[Concrete Ball]

Damn.

This was fuckin METAL man. I totally hate detuned and distorted shit like this but.... wow. This blows everything else that I've heard of this genre way the hell out there. I have to say this is going on my favs. Just... fucking incredible job.

Morphboy responds:

Thanks man! I love varying my work, and I must say this song really turned out the way I wanted it to. :)

[=SnowDayRave=]

Niiice

The synths definitely make me think snow or ice. It's very light-blue and everything. I like it, this should be the anthem of every kid who wakes up and sees snow covering everything as they go to ask their parents if school is closed.

If I had to say one thing it would be the ending just kinda... dies? I guess? It's really abrupt for the vibe the rest of the song puts off. Idk, i just think maybe you could fade out on those synths that you have in the beginning and it would be an awesome ending.

Very good job on this.

Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Thank you^^

I'm glad I was able to capture the feeling, exactly what I was going for.
I might fix the ending later, I thought I'd either add on to the song, or finish it better, but for now that's what it is.

edit: I made it fade/phase out, slightly better:] thanks again^^

[Technotronic Generica Ver. 1]

Trippin

Cool, but a pretty different style than what I would do. As seen in the Version 2.

ForestLomn responds:

And as seen from the scores of when these songs first came up, yours was liked a lot more. Thats why im working to finish that version.

[Technotronic Generica Ver. 2]

THAT'S ME!

:)

Great review, I know.

ForestLomn responds:

Ha ha yes thank you for the comment. No one else saw fit to comment, so yours is much appreciated.