Awesome guitar but...
You need a more convincing drumkit.
I suggest using XLN Audio's Addictive Drums. It's pretty amazing. Any guitarist without a drummer should have at least the demo version. It will blow any fake drumkit you've ever used right the fuck out of the water.
Seriously, then get the Metal Preset pack for it. I'm sure it will extra metalize even your blackest, most soul-splintering riffs and songs.
...Soul-Splinter,
Hmm... I have a new song name.
I actually have Superior Drummer 2.0, which is fuckin awesome, I used it on my Blackened cover. Its just very time consuming to map out the drum parts, I managed to do Eternity of Torment, but its not uploaded here. Thanks for the review man, I'll have new tunes with better drums soon...
Roflol!
I didn't read the descrip at first and was like "Dude... what the hell, I've heard this somewhere. KEYGENS! He's a pirate pirating a pirate!" But then I saw your comments and laughed.
Honestly I have to say the original is better because it does have all those awesome solos and all that. But this is a pretty good tribute.
And note sliding uses the "Pitch Bend" automation. At least in the trackers/samplers I've used.
I've found a few ways to pitch bend, but the good old "slide" option works just fine. Always good to read the author's comments. ;)
You need to work on volume.
The whole song is good, but... It's really fucking loud. Like... turn your speakers up or something because its sooo loud.
Your piano clips when the lower part comes in. The synths are so loud that you can almost not hear the beat. It's like 80/20 Synth to Beat at some points. At least try to keep it a 60/40 if you could.
So.. my suggestion would be to either turn down the mix a little bit, or turn down some parts individually. Otherwise I think this is good... minus the part where you spelled "Horizons" wrong.
8/10
4/5
Keep it up!
lol i kinda agree not that loud but thanks a ton for the tip!
i need more reviews and i will fix it all.
and LOL thanx for the correction on the spelling! :3
thanks a ton for the review! :D
-chimy727
I approve.
Love the 8-bit mixed with newer style sounds. I like it, but I wish you would expand on it a ton more though and maybe bring out the lead at the end a little bit more.
I think it gets kind of buried within the hard beat. But regardless this is very cool. Seems like any time I listen to your shit its always new and sounds like you put effort in there, even if you didn't.
Keep composing and mixing that shit up, my friend.
And btw, I noticed your score was rather low. I wonder why this is? Oh yeah, FUCKING 0 BOMB ASSHOLES. I'm fav'ing this page so I can 5 bomb the shit out of it for the next few days. It's my own personal way of getting back at the 0 bombers. Don't ask why, it makes sense in my fucked up head.
Thanks for the review, glad you liked it enough to write a review that long :D People usually just say "pretty cool" (if anything) instead of giving any helpful advice.
> I'm fav'ing this page so I can 5 bomb the shit out of it for the next few days.
Thanks for doing that, zero-bombers are one of my wost problems with this site. I can't get any publicity because of the fuckers who listen to 5 seconds of a song (if they even listen at all) before voting zero.
Hey assholes, if you're not going to listen to most/all of the song, don't vote zero to kill what might be a good submission. (Doesn't apply to just my submissions, of course.)
Dude, rock on!
I love the Kind of... I don't know how to describe it, actually. The two offbeat synth hits every measure(?) I don't know, but it's frigging awesome, it sounds like the song is just chugging along, kicking ass and taking names. You should definitely finish this in the direction it's heading. The instruments are frigging perfect. The beat is tight, the synths are just crunchy enough, and it all works out.
Thank you very much for this awesome review! Hmm, I should continue this work then, add some new effects on it and mix it more and get more power off from it then! I really try my best to continue this then and working more with this. Thank you very much for supporting review!
Needs Transitioning
But you should really make this into a full length song. The leads are badass, but there's really no build up into them. Which is some of the reason it's so "hard" is because there's a soft build to compare it to.
You don't know pain until you know pleasure, so start off softer and make it hard as fuck. You've definitely got the hard down, now make it all worth it :)
okay, if i got my stuff back i'll try
thanks
Awesome shit, my friend.
This was just... sweet, man. I love the sound of a nearly 8-bit lone-sine, and this was pretty damn awesome.
I love that you really worked on the melody more than the beat. I think that people are spending too much time on a beat, when the beat should actually complement the melody.
I'm not really one to plug my own songs, but this reminds me of one that I did called "Unnamed Journey". It's a different style than yours, but it's pretty similar at heart.
Wow, two reviews in the shortest time yet, not to mention them being good reviews, Thanks! :D
Also, I listened to your song "Unnamed Journey" and your right, the best way to describe its relationship would probably be to say that it has the same mood, and general listening perspective.
Can definately hear the fucking effort.
This was pretty damn engaging. The beginning drew me in pretty fast, which I like. The bass is deep, the lead is crunchy and melodic, the beat is steady and I love that it throws so much variation at you. That and I can't really hear it clip at all, which means great mastering.
Great work. Seriously, I know you might just kinda read those words "great work" like they're nothing, but I mean it. Great job.
Thanks man, your words mean a lot to me.
Very cool
But the leads are somewhat uninspired. And your piano sounds really... childish, is the only word I can come up for it.
You should put a key change in the middle of it, shift all the pitches up by one semitone. That would add a little bit of variation to it.
But nice work overall. I like to gripe at the little things, so don't get bent out of shape.
well im not gonna say im a composin master and the reason the piano sounds childish is coz well, i am a child XD. i dont know many music theory at all and i dont have much drive so i usually just mash it together and i dont have many good noises soooo can you help me out?
*Bows Down*
This was pretty excellent.
You need to get some better recording stuff. Because that would make this so much sexier.
The ending was just kind... um... Right.
Anyway, I enjoyed this very much and I do appreciate the humor and the difficulty of writing a funny song.
Thank you, my friend.
I've gotten a better mic since I recorded this. This one's quality is actually pretty bad even for that mic.
I like make the sound go "bwaaaww"
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