Nice, original.
Was pretty cool, I liked the breakbeat in the beginning that eventually turned into a steady one. Nice job. If there was one thing that I would say to do to this song, it would be to further differentiate the lead from the rest of the song by raising it by one octave, or adding a duplicate track to the lead one octave higher for the second portion of the song.
-4/5
-8/10
Fav'd :)
Thanx for the review man! finally a review that was fun to read! and I'm really glad u liked the song, and thanx for the tips I try to get those in my upcomming songs :D
by the way i'll think i will go and check out some of your songs XD
I'm Confused...
... as to why this has such a low rating. Because it's fucking incredible. Describes sadness perfectly, a state that I often have trouble describing musically. But you goddamn nailed it here. Mistakes, edited ending, whatever. It doesn't even matter because this is frigging amazing.
I, for one, am kind of annoyed wen people review my music with "WOW This is amazing! Thanks!!!", because they don't even understand everything that went into it. And although I do realize you havnt done much mastering or whatever, this is still fucking grand.
I honestly wish this would get the credit and attention it deserves, but because it's not techno, it will be ignored here on NG unless by some miracle it gets into the Top 5/"Best of All Time".
The one bright side to spiraling endless depression is that you have plenty of inspiration to express your dreary, painful feelings in any way you can to try and scrape the torment out from within.
Words of wisdom.
I am also a little disappointed with the somewhat low rating, compared to some other work on here. But oh well... That's music for you. Same thing applies to the Jonas Brothers - people sure do listen to crap these days!
Thanks a lot.
Jack.
EDIT: Rating seems to be not too bad now...
Very nice...
...and by "nice" I mean creepy. Yet still freaking awesome. I might... like... maybe... "Borrow" some of this and use it as an intro to a metal song I was doing. If I do end up actually encorporating this into a song, then I will of course ask you first.
But anyway, I really love how this works so well. It sounds extremely... smooth. Especially for something so sinister
Thank you! I would not mind if you 'borrow' some, so long as you re-orchestrate it to fit your song and give me credit. :) I would love to hear this swap over into some heavy metal. XD
Yessss
Perfect, man! :D You should let me know where this game is going to be so I can try it out!
hahahaha! Thanks man ill let you know.
Very nice.
So far, I think this is way cool. I don't really listen to trance as much anymore, but I used to a whole lot. And if I had this song back then I would most definitely have listened to it until I got tired of having it stuck in my head.
----Thoughts/Ideas----
At 1:56 you need a crash cymbal to indicate the beginning of the full entrance of the lead. Crash cymbals really make a big difference.
Maybe after the one lead dies off at 2:40, you could keep the bassline and other synths still there and the kick continuing, and expand upon the melody introduced at 1:18. Then bring back the lead that dropped off, and just keep it up.
Also, try and add some occasional variety in there. Either with the beat, or with the lead. Because, to me at least, it really shows that the mixer cares about keeping their audience interested.
Right now that's all I've got. I know how frustrating writer's/musician's block can be, and I'm pretty sure you'll work through it.
Perfect review and great advice. Thanks for the input.
Wow, sweet man!
Okay, this was pretty excellent. BUT... at like 00:50, I was expecting (and praying) that like this crazy beat would drop and it would be EPIC. But it didn't and honestly, I was a little let down (lol). Also, there is kind of this strange like... Phasing Wah sound especially prominent in the beginning that is offbeat and kind of out of place. One more thing: I would love to hear the deep bass come out a lot more at 00:54-1:12, that would make my day.
But overall, this was pretty damn awesome. I liked it a lot, and am considering downloading this because it's one of the few tracks on NG that I can honestly say I enjoyed thoroughly. Maybe you could refine this even more and try OCRemix. They probably won't accept because they are prudes and only accept the most insane-quality mixes.
GJ and keep on it!
Thanks for the feedback man! Eventually I'm gonna try to have it go into some dubstep at that part but i am still figuring everything out haha.
Very Chill
I liked this, it was pretty relaxing. And... kind of weird, but I didn't notice that there was an owl sound until like 1:50-ish.
Don't really have any criticism because I can't think of any way to improve this.
:D Thats great,
thanks man.
Cool, but not sure if I could listen forever.
This was pretty nice. If this was in a game that I was playing, however... I think that shaker sound would drive me crazy. Don't ask me why. Repetitive percussion just really gets my goat. I would kill the shaker about halfway through, then bring it back for the last few measures.
But regardless, this would go frigging PERFECT in a puzzle game, so for what you were trying to achieve I think it deserves a 5/5 10/10 because you did it.
Thanks soo much, ill post up another one with the shaker killed towards the last few measures and ill repost up tomorrow. :) Thanks soo much!
This was pretty sexy.
For a first? Damn, man. I really thought this was pretty cool. I really liked the warbly echo-verb sound. That's pretty much what drew me into this whole thing.
I would recommend using a harder synth bassline or possibly a more distinguishable lead, and I am not really one for beat, but I thought it was kind of weaker in that area (Mostly because I'm really picky and particular about the sounds I use in my beat). But regardless this was awesome.
I agree, a harder lead would work. :x Yeah, I used what I had for the drums. I didn't know what else to put in, so eh. ;D
Thanks for the review!
I like make the sound go "bwaaaww"
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