Very nice.
I'm liking this, the beat is sexy, the lead is very stutter-tastic and I just generally like the whole thing. It's funny, I wasn't even going to listen to this whole thing, but it just immediately drew me in. I kinda wish you had the leads go on a tirade and have like... a techno solo. That would be awesome. But the key change added some variation, so that works just as well.
I fav'd it and dl'd it, so I might as well review it :)
Very cool
But the leads are somewhat uninspired. And your piano sounds really... childish, is the only word I can come up for it.
You should put a key change in the middle of it, shift all the pitches up by one semitone. That would add a little bit of variation to it.
But nice work overall. I like to gripe at the little things, so don't get bent out of shape.
well im not gonna say im a composin master and the reason the piano sounds childish is coz well, i am a child XD. i dont know many music theory at all and i dont have much drive so i usually just mash it together and i dont have many good noises soooo can you help me out?
Awe-inspiring.
The subtle tones right there in the beginning really draw you in, and the beautiful leads at 0:42 and 0:59 are just... incredible. If this is how deaf people hear the world, I want to be deaf.
Hearing this just made me want to write an inspirational piece about the life of a man, shrouded in m-
Okay fuck this I cant do it anymore. This is just weird as all hell. But I do think it's funny so I'll vote 5/5 10/10.
...Okay...
Your lead is retarded. I'm not even going to make that sound nicer or nothing. You obviously know how to make music, and you have good synths and everything, but your lead seriously sounds just like a bunch of random-fuck notes.
Everything else sounds good. Just... fucking come up with a lead that's not doing way too much drugs.
Seriously, listening to this, I get the feeling you made everything else, and when it came to writing the lead you just said "fuck it, whatever, random notes on my keyboard. Don't give a shit anymore."
Lolwut,`
^5!
Very nice, sounds like you've been doing this for a little bit :)
This might be the 1st time you've added anything to the audio portal, but it's a great addition.
Oh yeah, constructive criticism.... umm.... Okay, I hate to do this, but I really don't have anything that MrF down there didn't say. I hate it when I'm like "I could use some constructive criticism or something, ANYTHING!" on my songs, and ppl are just like "I'TS GEWD NOTHING IMPROVE YOU NEED AWESOME!".
The only thing is... it doesn't really have an ending. I mean... kinda? I think? It's just a bit random for me.
thanks for the advice. Idk, i kinda like the end but i guess i wont do it in my next song.
O.o
That was... Umm... wow.
I know it was a demo, but wow. I felt like I was on drugs or something.
Regardless... this was fucking awesome. ^5!
You, my friend, are the winner of the day.
Very cool
You should definately add on to more of this, it's frigging sexy so far, and I like where it sounds like it's going.
If I would change one thing, it would be that just before the key change you need some more buildup. It kinda just sounds abrupt to me, and I wasn't really expecting it. Unless that's what you were going for. In which case, good job! (lol)
Also, you should put like... a lead solo kinda thing. That would be incredible. I'd probably pay for that shit. That'd make my day.
Great job.
Thank you for your input very much!
Right now...
... it sounds really Ambient. Which, I guess IS the genre. But I think it should be Classical if you're trying to make it more "LOTR"-like. Also, it needs percussion. NEEDS percussion. Like... Tympani rolls, cymbal crashes, and stuff like that. That makes it 10x more epic.
I'd keep working on it. You've got quite a bit here so far. So I wouldn't scrap the whole thing.
I like make the sound go "bwaaaww"
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